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Friday, March 13, 2015

Joseph Beasley
Professor Begert
English 102
March 13th, 2015
Communism
Karl Marx and Frederick Engels are famous German philosophers who introduced the ideas, or beginning ideas of communism. The system they wanted did not believe in the right of private property, it believed in community property. They believed such a system would, unlike a free capitalist system, be fair. This idea was supported by the belief that there are the Proletarians, a working class that can only live off their own labor, and the bourgeoisie class, who are the big capitalists who only allow the proletarians to live from small wages in trade for laborious work. Many nations embraced these ideas of communism, such as China, North Korea and the Soviet Union; however the Soviet Union, now Russia, failed with communism, China has turned away from maintaining many of their communist practices, and North Korea is very poor. Being attributed to communist authorities are around a hundred million deaths. It is said that communism has led to famine and a significant lack of freedom. This project will look at communism with the assumption that it is an inferior economic system, and then examine the reasons why, in communism’s pure form, it fails to work and leads to such horrors.
History is often represented as a record that allows us to know what to repeat, and what not to. It is said if we forget history we are bound to repeat our mistakes, and the mistake of communism is not only one to never forget, but communism is also a product of forgetting history. Communism is responsible for many deaths, for stealing of private property, and for terrible economies; but the fact that communism existed in the first place was because right and wrong had been deleted in the minds of those regimes. One of the first actions towards communism was a disregard for religion, something which offers a moral standard. In addition, communists denied existing truths, believing that everything is changing throughout time, including right and wrong. It is because of these actions that the stealing of private property and the murder of millions was considered acceptable. Such actions as these, which are truly evil, no matter what any government says, will never be right.
Communism’s beginning starts with its philosophy. One of the core beliefs is a view of history as a struggle. A continuous struggle, but as soon as the industrial revolution took place, the worst struggle came about, at least in the eyes of its philosophers. This struggle, explained in Engels’ “The Principles of Communism,” was the struggle between the Proletarians and the Bourgeoisie. In this view, the proletarians were workers who could only gain wealth from labor, and could not gain wealth from property. The bourgeoisie could gain wealth from property, and the proletarians were their slaves. In fact, in the view of Engels, this slavery was worse than the slavery that was in America’s South. The proletarians were trapped, and they believed that they could never escape. Because of this, Marx and Engels went on to propose that private property should be abolished, and instead community property be instituted. This system, they believed would liberate the proletariat. This system has since been instituted in many nations, and has often failed, or been modified.
            Communism is a terrible economic system that has led to much death, poverty, and terror. The cause of such problems, and why communism was even allowed to be introduced are the same; the communist philosophy ignores certain truths that are concrete. The fact that communism is flawed can immediately be seen through the fact that it leads to death and poverty; but it can also be seen by looking directly at the fundamental beliefs of communism. These fundamentals led to the constant violation of the right of life, the revoking of the right of property, and overarching, the idea that there is no constant truth through the belief that all is changing throughout time. For the affirmation of this fact, a more detailed explanation is necessary.
            Communism began with its philosophers, the two famous ones of which are Karl Marx and Frederick Engels.             In the opening words of their “Communist Manifesto,” they stated, “The history of all hitherto existing society is the history of class struggles. Freeman and slave, patrician and plebeian, lord and serf, guild-master and journeyman, in a word, oppressor and oppressed [.]” Marx and Engels viewed history as a constant struggle, and they believed that there was always someone on top and someone on bottom. But in their eyes, the worst manifestation came in the form of the proletarians and the bourgeoisie (Engels). In Engels’ “The Principles of Communism,” he lays out why. He explains how the industrial revolution was the beginning of the proletariat, and that the proletariat is only able to create wealth from labor, and cannot create wealth from capitol like the bourgeoisie. He said this happened when steam engines and spinning machines were invented. In his eyes, workers always had a skill that they could use for their benefit. An example could have been a blacksmith who was skilled at forming tools. But when the industrial revolution happened, Engels then says the workers lost that advantage. Factories with steam engines and spinning machines made the skill of the worker outdated. Instead of a blacksmith, machines would form tools better and cheaper. According to Engels, this brought the worker to a lower level. Instead of preforming unique skills, “the activity of the individual worker [was reduced] to simple, endlessly repeated mechanical motions” (Engels). The outcome was two very separate classes: The big capitalists who owned all means of production, and were able to make wealth from property, and then the laborers, who had to go work for the big capitalists and were obligated to deal with the big capitalist to attain substance (Engels). This brings forth the two classes, the bourgeoisie, who owned the means to gain substance, and the proletarians, who could only gain substance by dealing with the bourgeoisie.
        Because this ideology sees the proletariat as a slave of the bourgeoisie, Marx and Engels set out on a goal to liberate the proletariat. In the eyes of Engels, the ownership of the means of production only by the bourgeoisie created the slavery of the proletariat. To solve this problem he wrote,
[Society] will have to take the control of industry and of all branches of production out of the hands of mutually competing individuals, and instead institute a system in which all these branches of production are operated by society as a whole – that is, for the common account, according to a common plan, and with the participation of all members of society.
It will, in other words, abolish competition and replace it with association. (Engels)
With this system, the idea was that no one would be a slave to the bourgeoisie, because everyone now commonly owned the means of production. He then further stated, that since private ownership of the means of production implied that there is an individual right to property, the private property can no longer exist (Engels). In the end, Marx thought that since everyone contributed to the wealth, it should be commonly owned (Marx and Engels).
            The enforcement of this system is the next step in its creation, and that requires totalitarianism. Totalitarianism is “the political concept that the citizen should be totally subject to an absolute state authority” (“Totalitarianism”). The reason that totalitarianism is a necessary tool in communism is that communism as based around an ideology. As Ihor Kamenetsky, who was a professor of political science at Central Michigan University, stated, “In…Communist…ideology the basis of the ideal society was reduced to a single predominant factor….theoretically, on the solidarity of the classless society of the toilers on a global scale” (118). In the communist system, all need to believe according to the ideology, that is why totalitarianism is so important. In this system, the state tells the citizens what to believe, and “the line between ideology and philosophy is blurred” (Kamenetsky 120). Rather than ordinary citizens having a free way of thinking, they must stay with the totalitarian ideology which “is broad enough in scope to take stands on such issues as what is the meaning of life and how to distinguish good from evil and right from wrong” (Kamenetsky 120-1). This is how it works in communist nations. The state doesn’t uphold the truth of what is right and wrong, they determine it. In the case of communism, and most direct, the state determines that taking away private property and making it community property is right. But after the totalitarian authority determines what they think is right and wrong, they must preserve it.
            Totalitarian governments try to limit everything that could threaten them including, information. The act of preventing information and knowledge is called censorship. An example of censorship can be seen with the Soviet Union. As Valeria D. Stelmakh, a reading research specialist and project director of the Lenin State Library of Russia, wrote talking about the Soviet Union when it was about to fail, “[The] regimes attempts to forestall the impending collapse and to stabilize the situation included strengthening censorship and other repressive measures. At this time, the society had been living under an almost complete blockade of information, combined with a sophisticated system of misinformation and total censorship” (143-4). Since communism is so unique and contradicts so much of what is believed or desired, communist governments are required to hide anything that might contradict the communist ideology. As Fatos Lubonja, a man who himself suffered for the sake of communist censorship, said regarding the Soviet Union again, “Ideology was surmised to encompass the whole of philosophy, history, and economics, along with literature and the arts. It had the right to determine the other social or natural sciences, whose results never ran counter to its conclusions (244).” Not only did the communist totalitarian regimes censor those things such as philosophy, history, and science, they also heavily attacked religion. As Engels stated, “communism is the stage of historical development which makes all existing religions superfluous and brings about their disappearance.” Ihor Kamenetsky further explains how totalitarianism and religion can’t mix when he states, “the totalitarian system develops a secular faith claiming absolute loyalty for creation of an ‘earthly paradise’ and [also] because a totalitarian system, true to its all-embracing nature, can ultimately tolerate not organization with a creed that falls outside its own framework” (123). Kamenetsky later gives the example of Christianity, which believes there is an intrinsic value on the individual soul of every human, no matter what class, which he thinks makes all people brothers (123). Not only does this put a value on human life, it also views all as equal in a respect that would be more important than the goal of communal ownership, therefore making the communist goal secondary. Because of these reasons, that knowledge and ideas often would conflict with the communist goal, they would censor. But an important thing to acknowledge is how.
            In order to prevent the existence of dangerous information, communist regimes would have to ignore the idea of privacy, an action which is part of totalitarianism. When someone goes against the ideology, they must be changed or eliminated. An example of this can be seen in the arrest of several opposing leaders by the Soviet Party. Nicolas Werth, a researcher at the Institut d’Histoire du Temps Present, noted,
First and foremost among the ‘doubtful element’ to be arrested were the leaders of opposition parties who were still at liberty. On 15 August 1918 Lenin and Dzerzhinsky jointly signed an order for the arrest of …the principal leaders of the Menshevik Party, whose press had long been silenced and whose representatives had been hounded out by the soviets. (Courtois et al 73)
Not only was the action of arresting possible threats used, but some threats were just killed. During a movement known as the Great Purge, many were executed, however, according to Werth, there was a “notably…sharp increase in the numbers of victims who had some form of higher education (over 70 percent in 1936-1939), confirming that the terror at the end of the decade was aimed particularly at the educated elite, whether they were Party members or not” (Courtois 191-2). As pointed out earlier, philosophy, science, and history weren’t allowed to work by themselves, but were only allowed to show information according to the ideology of communism. Therefore, those of high education, who would likely know, or could come to know facts or ideas contrary to communism, would be a threat. According to communist totalitarianism, the act of removing such threats for the maintenance of the communist ideology would be essential. Another issue came about when citizens started to become too knowledgeable about actions done by the state. Stephen Courtois, the director of research at the Centre National de la Recherche Scientifique in Paris, stated that “When the tyrants could no longer hide the truth-the firing squads, the concentration camps, the man-made famine- they did their best to justify these atrocities by glossing them over….As if by magic, the concentration-camp system was turned into a ‘reeducation system,’ and the tyrants became ‘educators’ who transformed the people of the old society into ‘new people’” (Courtois et al 19). In other words, if an individual heard of actions they didn’t agree with, such as firing squads, he could be sent to a concentration camp to be reeducated back to the ways of communism. From these examples, of how communist governments can hold back information through dealing with people, at least three ways can be seen. One is to arrest them, another is to kill them, and the last is to send them to a concentration camp to be reeducated.
            The outcomes of communism are quite negative and evil. One of the problems is poverty. Individually, people in communist countries are generally quite poor, just simply in the sense that they are not allowed to own property. This is the most obvious form of poverty that comes with communism. But a nation as a whole can become quite poor as well. Carlos Franqui, a former member of the communist party in Cuba, said regarding communism’s effects on the Soviet Union, “[T]he Soviet Union has reached parity with the United States in nuclear weapons and the dominion over outer space, but it lacks bread, beef, milk, and wheat” (175). In a more specific example in the Soviet Union, policies based on Marxist ideas were passed under Khrushchev’s leadership. Those policies failed, and led to the import of grain rather than their own production (Zelenin 44, 66-7). In an overall statement regarding communist poverty, Carlos Franqui stated, “[The] scientific society becomes incapable of renewal, unable to produce and create. Thus, it threatens the material base necessary to maintain the enormous cost of an expansive empire…Communism has advanced outward, but is paralyzing from within” (175). Also in the realm of poverty is the man-made famine. According to Werth, in 1932-3, peasants in the agricultural areas of the Soviet Union were required to allow much of their harvest to go to the state, because of course, the food wasn’t really the property of the farmer, but it was property of the community. Peasants found this act by the state threatening and they attempted to hold back some of their food for themselves. As time would pass, the state would collect higher volumes (Courtois et al 160-1). Because of the incompliance of the peasants, the state went and took all food and grain, even the grain meant for sowing new crops. Because of this, many peasants tried to go to the cities, but the state forced them to stay. This resulted in many deaths and there were even reports of cannibalism (Courtois et al 164-5). This poverty created by the communist regime in the Soviet Union shows how bad the problem can be, but it also leads to the next point concerning outcomes of communism, that being death.
            Already seen, death has been quite common in the Soviet Union. Overall, according to Courtois, the Soviet Union under communism has killed an estimated twenty million people (Courtois et al 4). When taking into account the communist regimes of the Soviet Union, China, Vietnam, North Korea, Cambodia, Eastern Europe, Latin America, Africa, Afghanistan, and the international communist movement and communist parties not in power, the estimated total deaths reaches around 100 million (Courtois et al 4). Many of the deaths came in forms such as
[F]iring squads, hanging, drowning, battering, and, in certain cases, gassing, poisoning, or ‘car accidents...man-made famine, the withholding of food, or both; deportation, through which death can occur in transit (either through physical exhaustion or through confinement in an enclosed space), at one’s place of residence, or through forced labor (exhaustion, illness, hunger, cold). (Courtois et al 4)
Communist regimes don’t regard life as valuable. As seen earlier, if someone refuses to comply with the communist ideology, communist regimes don’t mind removing them from existence.
            In addition to noting that poverty and death are outcomes of communism, some other general freedoms were lost as well. One is individualism. In communist nations, as already mentioned, people do not have the freedom to be self-reliant or independent, but rather they have to conform to the communist ideology. That is what is required in a totalitarian communist regime. Under that, people do not have the freedom of religion, the freedom of speech, and the freedom to pursue what knowledge, philosophy, and arts they wish.
            Now that it’s seen that communism results in many problems, it is important to see why. In order to do this, an examination of the philosophy will give a definite picture, but not only an examination of Marxist philosophy, but also the Western philosophy it contradicts. Marx and Engels took a jump when they wrote their communist principles, and the biggest jump was the denial of truth, that being constant truths. A clear example of this can be seen when Engels states, “Private property has not always existed… [Towards] the end of the Middle Ages, there arose a new mode of production…which had outgrown the old property relations, [creating] a new property form, private property”. Engels states that every change in the social order and also every revolution within property relations brought about changes incompatible with old property relations. Basically, at times private property was appropriate for that social order and at other times not. The first strange idea shown through this statement is that private property didn’t always exist, and that it apparently first appeared at the end of the Middle Ages. This is untrue. The Polish-American academic and historian Richard Pipes noted, “Contemporary anthropologists are virtually at one that there is no society so crude as to be a stranger to private property. Hunters and gatherers, the most primitive of all human groups, typically [held] in common the land from which they [drew] their sustenance….they also [acknowledged] as private property that which their members [acquired] through personal effort” (Pipes 45). Also, and more specifically, in the book of Exodus, a book kept by the Jews for thousands of years, it states, “If a man gives his neighbor money or goods to keep for him, and it is stolen from the man’s house, if the thief is caught, he shall pay double. If the thief is not caught, then the owner of the house shall appear before the judges, to determine whether he laid his hand on his neighbor’s property” (New American Standard Bible, Ex. 22.7-8). Exodus also states, “You shall not steal” (New American Standard Bible, Ex. 20.15). Obviously the right of private property has existed far longer than Engels says it has. This dilemma can further be explained from the words of the Hungarian-American Philosopher and scholar Tibor Machan when he talks about the importance of the individual. He states,
The Marxists…claim that in the 16th century the individual was invented, not merely discovered or his existence politically affirmed, for the sake of sustaining economic productivity…. It's a myth.... According to Marxists, there was a period of human history where the belief in the importance of the individual had an objective historical function, not because it's true, but because it contributes to certain crucial elements of capitalism. (Machan)
Marxists believe in a right of property, they just believe in the right of community property. If they believed in the importance of the individual, they would need to believe in the individual’s right to property. Because of this, by acting as though the importance of the individual was just invented as a need of the time, they tried to show that the rights of the individual, including the right of private property, are not important. Engels lied. The individual right of property has existed for a very long time. But though it has existed for a very long time, it is important to know why private is so important, and why it is true.
            From a philosophical standpoint, the right of property is justified as a natural right. A natural right is a right that can be observed from nature. John Locke was a famous philosopher who examined natural rights and natural law. Natural law and natural rights have been a significant influence on western culture and are the basis for much of the freedoms and rights people enjoy. Locke said, “The state of Nature has a law of Nature to govern it, which…teaches all mankind who will but consult it, that being all equal and independent, no one ought to harm another in his life, health, liberty or possessions” (Skousen). Locke’s philosophy, along with the philosophy of many other similar philosophers and thinkers of natural law, relies on the belief that there is truth, and that it can be determined by observing nature. Locke takes an angle looking at every human as independent and with certain equal rights, which include life, liberty, and property. Locke, speaking of the right of property, stated, “[Every] man has the ‘property’ in his own ‘person.’ This, nobody has any right to but himself. The ‘labour’ of his body and the ‘work’ of his hands, we may say, are properly his. Whatsoever, then, he removes out of the state that Nature hath provided and left it in, he hath mixed his labour with it, and joined to it something that is his own, and thereby makes it his property” (Skousen). Through this, Locke demonstrates first that when someone takes something out of its natural state, it becomes their property. Locke later shows this through an example of a man collecting acorns out of the woods for his nourishment. Locke states, “if the first gathering made them not [the man’s property], nothing else could (Skousen).” The second point made is that property is part of the person. By this, Locke means that when someone invests their own labor and work into something, they invest part of themselves into it; therefore it is part of them. This means if a person were to find and clear an acre of weed infested land, plow it, plant wheat, and then gather it when it is grown, that wheat would naturally be theirs because it is the fruit of their own work. If this right wasn’t respected, that person could possibly starve to death, as happened in the earlier example with the peasants in the Soviet Union. This shows the right of property protects the right of life, which means that the right of property has great importance.
            Communism directly violates the true principles of nature, justifying itself by acting like the principles were just invented, but in fact, the principles were there all along. Because communists refused to acknowledge the right of property, this inevitably led to the violation of other natural rights, such as life and liberty. Because of this, the true failure of communism is exposed. John Locke said, “The best way to reach the truth is to examine things as they really are, and not to steer by fancies what we have worked up for ourselves or have been taught by others to imagine” (Locke 43). Engels and Marx may have imagined a system where people would not be subjugated and enslaved, as they thought the system was at the moment. But their system, when instituted, did not result in freedom, it resulted in tyranny. It was just a fancy. In communism’s goal to liberate the proletariat, many lost their liberties and freedoms that they naturally deserved. Furthermore, many, an estimated 100 million people, lost their lives for the pursuit of the communist goal.
            In conclusion, communism is an economic system built on falsehood. It attempts to remove a right that, though communists deny it, is inherent in nature, and essential for the life and liberty of the individual. Through the communist schemes, it has resulted in an immense number of deaths and a significant lack of freedom. Its existence provides an example of what happens when history is ignored, and communism also provides an historical example of what to not repeat.



  

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Final

Joseph Beasley
Professor Begert
English 102
March 13th, 2015
Communism
Karl Marx and Frederick Engels are famous German philosophers who introduced the ideas, or beginning ideas of communism. The system they wanted did not believe in the right of private property, it believed in community property. They believed such a system would, unlike a free capitalist system, be fair. This idea was supported by the belief that there are the Proletarians, a working class that can only live off their own labor, and the bourgeoisie class, who are the big capitalists who only allow the proletarians to live from small wages in trade for laborious work. Many nations embraced these ideas of communism, such as China, North Korea and the Soviet Union; however the Soviet Union, now Russia, failed with communism, China has turned away from maintaining many of their communist practices, and North Korea is very poor. Being attributed to communist authorities are around a hundred million deaths. It is said that communism has led to famine and a significant lack of freedom. This project will look at communism with the assumption that it is an inferior economic system, and then examine the reasons why, in communism’s pure form, it fails to work and leads to such horrors.
History is often represented as a record that allows us to know what to repeat, and what not to. It is said if we forget history we are bound to repeat our mistakes, and the mistake of communism is not only ones to never forget, but communism is also a product of forgetting history. Communism is responsible for many deaths, for stealing of private property, and for terrible economies; but the fact that communism existed in the first place was because right and wrong had been deleted in the minds of those regimes. One of the first action towards communism was a disregard for religion, something which offers a moral standard. In addition, communists denied existing truths, believing that everything is changing throughout time, including right and wrong. It is because of these actions that the stealing of private property and the murder of millions was considered acceptable. Such actions as that, which are truly evil, no matter what any government says, will never be right.
Communism’s beginning starts with its philosophy. One of the core beliefs is a view of history as a struggle. A continuous struggle, but as soon as the industrial revolution took place, the worst struggle came about, at least in the eyes of its philosophers. This struggle, explained in Engels’ “The Principles of Communism,” was the struggle between the Proletarians and the Bourgeoisie. In this view, the proletarians were workers who could only gain wealth from labor, and could not gain wealth from property. The bourgeoisie could gain wealth from property, and the proletarians were their slaves. In fact, in the view of Engels, this slavery was worse than the slavery that was in America’s South. The proletariat was trapped, and they believed that they could never escape. Because of this, Marx and Engels went on to propose that private property be abolished, and instead community property be instituted. This system, they believed would liberate the proletariat. This system has since been instituted in many nations, and has often failed, or been modified.
            Communism is a terrible economic system that has led to much death, poverty, and terror. The cause of such problems, and why communism was even allowed to be introduced are the same; the communist philosophy ignores certain truths that are concrete. The fact that communism is flawed can immediately be seen through the fact that it leads to death and poverty; but it can also be seen by looking directly at the fundamental beliefs of communism. The constant violation of the right of life, the revoking of the right of property, and overarching, the idea that there is no constant truth through the belief that all is changing throughout time. For the affirmation of this fact, a more detailed explanation is necessary.
            Communism began with its philosophers, the two famous ones of which are Karl Marx and Frederick Engels. In the opening words of their “Communist Manifesto,” they stated, “The history of all hitherto existing society is the history of class struggles. Freeman and slave, patrician and plebeian, lord and serf, guild-master and journeyman, in a word, oppressor and oppressed [.]” Marx and Engels viewed history as a constant struggle, and they believed that there was always someone on top and someone on bottom. But in their eyes, the worst manifestation came in the form of the proletarians and the bourgeoisie (Engels). In Engels’ “The Principles of Communism,” he lays out why. He explains how the industrial revolution was the beginning of the proletariat, and that the proletariat is only able to create wealth from labor, and cannot create wealth from capitol like the bourgeoisie. He said this happened when steam engines and spinning machines were invented. In his eyes, workers always had a skill that they could use for their benefit. An example could have been a blacksmith who was skilled at forming tools. But when the industrial revolution happened, Engels then says the workers lost that advantage. Factories with steam engines and spinning machines made the skill of the worker outdated. Instead of a blacksmith, machines would form tools better and cheaper. According to Engels, this brought the worker to a lower level. Instead of preforming unique skills, “the activity of the individual worker [was reduced] to simple, endlessly repeated mechanical motions” (Engels). The outcome was two very separate classes: The big capitalists who owned all means of production, and were able to make wealth from property, and then the laborers, who had to go work for the big capitalists and were obligated to deal with the big capitalist to attain substance (Engels). This brings forth the two classes, the bourgeoisie, who owned the means to gain substance, and the proletarians, who can only gain substance by dealing with the bourgeoisie.
        Because this ideology sees the proletariat as a slave of the bourgeoisie, Marx and Engels set out on a goal to liberate the proletariat. In the eyes of Engels, the ownership of the means of production only by the bourgeoisie created the slavery of the proletariat. To solve this problem he wrote,
[Society] will have to take the control of industry and of all branches of production out of the hands of mutually competing individuals, and instead institute a system in which all these branches of production are operated by society as a whole – that is, for the common account, according to a common plan, and with the participation of all members of society.
It will, in other words, abolish competition and replace it with association. (Engels)
With this system, the idea was that no one would be a slave to the bourgeoisie, because everyone now commonly owned the means of production. He then further stated, that since private ownership of the means of production implied that there is an individual right to property, the private property can no longer exist (Engels). In the end, Marx thought that since everyone contributed to the wealth, it should be commonly owned (Marx and Engels).
            The enforcement of this system is the next step in its creation, and that requires totalitarianism. Totalitarianism is “the political concept that the citizen should be totally subject to an absolute state authority” (“Totalitarianism”). The reason that totalitarianism is a necessary tool in communism is that communism as based around an ideology. As Ihor Kamenetsky, who was a professor of political science at Central Michigan University, stated, “In…Communist…ideology the basis of the ideal society was reduced to a single predominant factor….theoretically, on the solidarity of the classless society of the toilers on a global scale” (118). In the communist system, all need to believe according to the ideology, that is why totalitarianism is so important. In this system, the state tells the citizens what to believe, and “the line between ideology and philosophy is blurred” (Kamenetsky 120). Rather than ordinary citizens having a free way of thinking, they must stay with the totalitarian ideology which “is broad enough in scope to take stands on such issues as what is the meaning of life and how to distinguish good from evil and right from wrong” (Kamenetsky 120-1). This is how it works in communist nations. The state doesn’t uphold the truth of what is right and wrong, they determine it. In the case of communism, and most direct, the state determines that taking away private property and making it community property is right. But after the totalitarian authority determines what they think is right and wrong, they must preserve it.
            Totalitarian governments try to limit everything that could threaten them including, information. The act of preventing information and knowledge is called censorship. An example of censorship can be seen with the Soviet Union. As Valeria D. Stelmakh, a reading research specialist and project director of the Lenin State Library of Russia, wrote talking about the Soviet Union when it was about to fail, “[The] regimes attempts to forestall the impending collapse and to stabilize the situation included strengthening censorship and other repressive measures. At this time, the society had been living under an almost complete blockade of information, combined with a sophisticated system of misinformation and total censorship” (143-4). Since communism is so unique and contradicts so much of what is believed or desired, communist governments are required to hide anything that might contradict the communist ideology. As Fatos Lubonja, a man who himself suffered for the sake of communist censorship, said regarding the Soviet Union again, “Ideology was surmised to encompass the whole of philosophy, history, and economics, along with literature and the arts. It had the right to determine the other social or natural sciences, whose results never ran counter to its conclusions (244).” Not only did the communist totalitarian regimes censor those things such as philosophy, history, and science, they also heavily attacked religion. As Engels stated, “communism is the stage of historical development which makes all existing religions superfluous and brings about their disappearance.” Ihor Kamenetsky further explains how totalitarianism and religion can’t mix when he states, “the totalitarian system develops a secular faith claiming absolute loyalty for creation of an ‘earthly paradise’ and [also] because a totalitarian system, true to its all-embracing nature, can ultimately tolerate not organization with a creed that falls outside its own framework” (123). Kamenetsky later gives the example of Christianity, which believes there is an intrinsic value on the individual soul of every human, no matter what class, which he thinks make all people brothers (123). Not only does this put a value on human life, it also views all as equal in a respect that would be more important than the goal of communal ownership, therefore making the communist goal secondary. Because of these reasons, that knowledge and ideas often would conflict with the communist goal, they would censor it. But an important thing to acknowledge is how.
            In order to prevent the existence of dangerous information, communist regimes would have to ignore the idea of privacy, an action which is part of totalitarianism. When someone goes against the ideology, they must be changed or eliminated. An example of this can be seen in the arrest of several opposing leaders by the Soviet Party. Nicolas Werth, a researcher at the Institut d’Histoire du Temps Present, noted,
First and foremost among the ‘doubtful element’ to be arrested were the leaders of opposition parties who were still at liberty. On 15 August 1918 Lenin and Dzerzhinsky jointly signed an order for the arrest of …the principal leaders of the Menshevik Party, whose press had long been silenced and whose representatives had been hounded out by the soviets. (Courtois et al 73)
Not only was the action of arresting possible threats a used, but some threats were just killed. During a movement known as the Great Purge, many were executed, however, according to Werth, there was a “notably…sharp increase in the numbers of victims who had some form of higher education (over 70 percent in 1936-1939), confirming that the terror at the end of the decade was aimed particularly at the educated elite, whether they were Party members or not” (Courtois 191-2) As pointed out earlier, philosophy, science, and history weren’t allowed to work by themselves, but were only allowed to show information according to the ideology of communism. Therefore, those of high education, who would likely know, or could come to know facts or ideas contrary to communism, would be a threat. According to communist totalitarianism, the act of removing such threats for the maintenance of the communist ideology would be essential. Another issue came about when citizens started to become too knowledgeable about actions done by the state. Stephen Courtois, the director of research at the Centre National de la Recherche Scientifique in Paris, stated that “When the tyrants could no longer hide the truth-the firing squads, the concentration camps, the man-made famine- they did their best to justify these atrocities by glossing them over….As if by magic, the concentration-camp system was turned into a ‘reeducation system,’ and the tyrants became ‘educators’ who transformed the people of the old society into ‘new people’” (Courtois et al 19). In other words, if an individual heard of actions they didn’t agree with, such as firing squads, he could be sent to a concentration camp to be reeducated back to the ways of communism. From these examples, of how communist governments can hold back information through dealing with people, at least three ways can be seen. One is to arrest them, another is to kill them, and the last is to send them to a concentration camp to be reeducated.
            The outcomes of communism are quite negative and evil. One of the problems is poverty. Individually people in communist countries are generally quite poor, just simply in the sense that they are not allowed to own property. This is the most obvious form of poverty that comes with communism. But a nation as a whole can become quite poor as well. Carlos Franqui, a former member of the communist party in Cuba, said regarding communism’s effects on the Soviet Union, “[T]he Soviet Union has reached parity with the United States in nuclear weapons and the dominion over outer space, but it lacks bread, beef, milk, and wheat” (175). In a more specific example in the Soviet Union, policies based on Marxist ideas were passed under Khrushchev’s leadership. Those policies failed, and led to the import of grain rather than their own production (Zelenin 44, 66-7). In an overall statement regarding communist poverty, Carlos Franqui stated, “[The] scientific society becomes incapable of renewal, unable to produce and create. Thus, it threatens the material base necessary to maintain the enormous cost if an expansive empire…Communism has advanced outward, but is paralyzing from within” (175). Also in the realm of poverty is the man-made famine. According to Werth, in 1932-3, peasants in the agricultural areas of the Soviet Union were required to allow much of their harvest to go to the state, because of course, the food wasn’t really the property of the farmer, but it was property of the community. Peasants found this act by the state threatening and they attempted to hold back some of their food for themselves. As time would pass, the state would collect higher volumes (Courtois et al 160-1). Because of the incompliance of peasants, the state went and took all food and grain, even the grain meant for sowing new crops. Because of this, many peasants tried to go to the cities, but the state forced them to stay. This resulted in many deaths and there were even reports of cannibalism (Courtois et al 164-5). This poverty created by the communist regime in the Soviet Union shows how bad the problem can be, but it also leads to the next point concerning outcomes of communism, that being death.
            Already seen, death has been quite common in the Soviet Union. Overall, according to Courtois, the Soviet Union under communism has killed an estimated twenty million people (Courtois et al 4). When taking into account the communist regimes of the Soviet Union, China, Vietnam, North Korea, Cambodia, Eastern Europe, Latin America, Africa, Afghanistan, and the international communist movement and communist parties not in power, the estimated total deaths reaches around 100 million (Courtois et al 4). Many of the deaths came in forms such as
[F]iring squads, hanging, drowning, battering, and, in certain cases, gassing, poisoning, or ‘car accidents...man-made famine, the withholding of food, or both; deportation, through which death can occur in transit (either through physical exhaustion or through confinement in an enclosed space), at one’s place of residence, or through forced labor (exhaustion, illness, hunger, cold). (Courtois et al 4)
Communist regimes don’t regard life as valuable. As seen earlier, if someone refuses to comply with the communist ideology, communist regimes don’t mind removing them from existence.
            In addition to noting that poverty and death are outcomes of communism, some other general freedoms were lost as well. One is individualism. In communist nations, as already mentioned, people do not have the freedom to be self-reliant or independent, but rather they have to conform to the communist ideology. That is what is required in a totalitarian communist regime. Under that, people do not have the freedom of religion, freedom of speech, and the freedom to pursue what knowledge, philosophy, and arts they wish.
            Now that it’s seen that communism results in many problems, it is important to see why. In order to do this, an examination of the philosophy will give a definite picture, but not only an examination of Marxist philosophy, but also the Western philosophy it contradicts. Marx and Engels took a jump when they wrote their communist principles, and the biggest jump was the denial of truth, that being constant truths. A clear example of this can be seen when Engels states, “Private property has not always existed… [Towards] the end of the Middle Ages, there arose a new mode of production…which had outgrown the old property relations, [creating] a new property form, private property”. Engels states that every change in the social order and also every revolution within property relations brought about changes incompatible with old property relations. Basically, at times private property was appropriate for that social order and at other times not. The first strange idea shown through this statement is that private property didn’t always exist, and that it apparently first appeared at the end of the Middle Ages. This is untrue. The Polish-American academic and historian Richard Pipes noted, “Contemporary anthropologists are virtually at one that there is no society so crude as to be a stranger to private property. Hunters and gatherers, the most primitive of all human groups, typically [held] in common the land from which they [drew] their sustenance….they also [acknowledged] as private property that which their members [acquired] through personal effort” (Pipes 45). Also, and more specifically, in the book of Exodus, a book kept by the Jews for thousands of years, it states, “If a man gives his neighbor money or goods to keep for him, and it is stolen from the man’s house, if the thief is caught, he shall pay double. If the thief is not caught, then the owner of the house shall appear before the judges, to determine whether he laid his hand on his neighbor’s property” (New American Standard Bible, Ex. 22.7-8). Exodus also states, “You shall not steal” (New American Standard Bible, Ex. 20.15). Obviously the right of private property has existed far longer than Engels says it has. This dilemma can further be explained from the words of the Hungarian-American Philosopher and scholar Tibor Machan when he talks about the importance of the individual. He states,
The Marxists…claim that in the 16th century the individual was invented, not merely discovered or his existence politically affirmed, for the sake of sustaining economic productivity…. It's a myth.... According to Marxists, there was a period of human history where the belief in the importance of the individual had an objective historical function, not because it's true, but because it contributes to certain crucial elements of capitalism. (Machan)
Marxists believe in a right of property, they just believe in the right of community property. If they believed in the importance of the individual, they would need to believe in the individual’s right to property. Because of this, by acting as though the importance of the individual was just invented as a need of the time, they tried to show that the rights of the individual, including private property, are not important. Engels lied. The individual right of property has existed for a very long time. But though it has existed for a very long time, it is important to know why private is so important, and why it is true.
            From a philosophical standpoint, the right of property is justified as a natural right. A natural right is a right that can be observed from nature. John Locke was a famous philosopher who examined natural rights and natural law. Natural law and natural rights have been a significant influence on western culture and are the basis for much of the freedoms and rights people enjoy. Locke said, “The state of Nature has a law of Nature to govern it, which…teaches all mankind who will but consult it, that being all equal and independent, no one ought to harm another in his life, health, liberty or possessions” (Skousen). Locke’s philosophy, along with many other similar philosophers and thinkers of natural law, relies on the belief that there is truth, and that it can be determined by observing nature. Locke takes an angle looking at every human as independent and with certain equal rights, which include life, liberty, and property. Locke, speaking of the right of property, stated, “[Every] man has the ‘property’ in his own ‘person.’ This, nobody has any right to but himself. The ‘labour’ of his body and the ‘work’ of his hands, we may say, are properly his. Whatsoever, then, he removes out of the state that Nature hath provided and left it in, he hath mixed his labour with it, and joined to it something that is his own, and thereby makes it his property” (Skousen). Through this, Locke demonstrates first that when someone takes something out of its natural state, it becomes their property. Locke later shows this through an example of a man collecting acorns out of the woods for his nourishment. Locke states “if the first gathering made them not [the man’s property], nothing else could (Skousen).” The second point made is that property is part of the person. By this, Locke means that when someone invests their own labor and work into something, they invest part of themselves into it; therefore it is part of them. This means if a person were to find and clear an acre of weed infested land, plow it, plant wheat, and then gather it when it is grown, that wheat would naturally be theirs because it is the fruit of their own work. If this right wasn’t respected, that person could possibly starve to death, as happened in the earlier example with peasants in the Soviet Union. Because of this, the right of property has great importance because it protects the right of life.
            Communism directly violates the true principles of nature, justifying themselves by acting like the principles were just invented, but in fact, the principles were there all along. Because communists refused to acknowledge the right of property, this inevitably led to the violation of other natural rights, such as life and liberty. Because of this, the true failure of communism is exposed. John Locke said, “The best way to reach the truth is to examine things as they really are, and not to steer by fancies what we have worked up for ourselves or have been taught by others to imagine” (Locke 43). Engels and Marx may have imagined a system where people would not be subjugated and enslaved, as they thought the system was at the moment. But their system, when instituted did not result in freedom, it resulted in tyranny. It was just a fancy. In communism’s goal to liberate the proletariat, many lost their liberties and freedoms that they naturally deserved. And furthermore, many, an estimated 100 million people, lost their lives for the pursuit of the communist goal.
            In conclusion, communism is an economic system built on falsehood. It attempts to remove a right that, though communists deny it, is inherent in nature, and essential for the life and liberty of the individual. Through the communist schemes, it has resulted in an immense number of deaths and a significant lack of freedom. Its existence provides an example of what happens when history is ignored, and communism also provides an historical example of what to not repeat.

  

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Friday, March 6, 2015

Chapter Seventeen



            Chapter seventeen looked are revising and editing. The first aspect it examined was what to focus on as the document is being revises. The book viewed revising as a big-picture way of thinking, like seeing whether or not the document really helps the writer achieve their purpose, and examining whether or not the project would be appropriate when communicating to the readers, who have different values and beliefs. When revising, a review of the arguments is beneficial to show if they are structure in a way that is compatible with the readers’ needs, interests, values, and beliefs. And it is also important to observe whether or not the arguments will help the reader understand the thesis statement. The sources should also be examined to make sure that they not only appropriately support the point, but they also integrated into the text properly with the documentation system used. Making the document easy to read and understand can be ensured by reviewing the structure and organization, making sure the content is clearly laid out in support of the point, and also by making sure the appropriate design and genre is being used. There are some good strategies that allow the process of revising to be done effectively. Saving multiple drafts allows the different stages in the revising process to be saved, that way nothing is lost. Highlighting different aspects of the document makes it easier for the writer to recognize the structure and what needs to be done. In order to make sure the document is solid in its reasoning, challenging the assumptions can allow the writer make sure their document is secure. This can be done by the writer putting themselves in the place of the reader, challenging the content, and examining the significance of the statements. Scanning the heading and subheadings, and also looking at the first sentence of every paragraph allows the writer see the structure and organization of the document. The final strategy is to ask for feedback from someone else. When editing a document, checking for accuracy is important. This includes making sure the evidence is presented properly, the quotations are accurate, and that the spelling is correct. It is also important not to use too many words. Too much can be confusing. Making sure that the concepts, numbers, sources, and the format of the document are consistent will avoid confusion and add credibility. The style of the document is also important. Using the right words and not overly complex sentences will allow a better opinion in the eyes of the reader. Proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation are also important. When editing, reading should be done carefully. This can be achieved by reading after a break, pausing, reading aloud, and in reverse. When reading through the document, inaccuracy, inconsistency, and sexist language can be marked. In order to maintain proper spelling, grammar, and styles, the information provided by word processors should be used with caution. In the end, asking someone for feedback will allow someone with fresh eyes to find problems the writer might have missed.

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Chapter Thirteen



            Organizing was the focus of chapter thirteen. It started off by looking at what organizing patterns should be used, first of which was chronology. The chronology pattern examines a sequence of events in relation to time. Such a system would be commonly used in a document examining a historical event. Many other patterns exist, including description, which is a concise orderly point by point explanation, cause and effect, which looks at various factors and then leads them to their outcome, pros and cons, which organizes a list of good and bad about certain issues in order to support a side, and other patterns. Once a pattern on determined, the arrangement of arguments becomes necessary. Labelling evidence encourages quick understanding of its topic, and therefore, allows evidence to be easily organized according to an outline. Grouping evidence, or organizing evidence according to similarity, is also an option. This can be done by storing evidence in separate files. Clustering can be used by listing out visually a thesis statement and moving out from that to other related reasons and evidence. This way, the relationship between those separate facets can be discovered. Another is mapping. Through this, the reasons and evidence are laid out in a sequence of building. This form works well with patterns such as chronology, cause and effect, comparison contrast, cost benefit, and problem solution. The creation of an outline allows a general view of the sequence of arguments and reasons throughout the document. An informal outline can vary, but in general would show the key points of a document. A formal outline is more strict, and uses numerals and letters to order points, sub points, and any further points. This helps show the hierarchy of the points. To depict the contents of the points, short phrases can be used, but entire sentences also. Sentences can start the process towards a draft of a paper, and also help depict the structure of the paper.

Tuesday, February 17, 2015

Chapter Nineteen



            Chapter nineteen looked at designing documents and presentations. It reviewed many of the possibilities. The first it examined were academic essays. Academic essays normally have wide margins, a standard easily readable font such as 12-point Times New Roman, and double spacing. The second that was examined were multimodal essays, which are essays that contain various types of illustrations and media in a linear fashion to support the author’s points. These are expected to be viewed on some kind of digital devise. The third focus of this chapter was the designing of articles. The uses of articles can vary widely, and can include charts and photographs. The specific aim of the article and its publication can vary its design. The forth aim of this chapter is how to design a web site. Web sites should be well organized with menus, lists and titles. Information should be presented in small easy to understand portions. A good font for screens should be selected. Evidence supporting the point can be shown as illustrations and videos. How to design oral presentations was fifth in this chapter. This form of communication involves having a clear outline, along with a strong opener and some key points, wrapped up with a strong conclusion. Notes can be made to keep the speaker on track and from forgetting important information. When giving such a presentation, some of the important actions to take are speaking clearly, speaking slowly and understandably, speaking loudly, and maintaining some eye contact with the audience. The sixth examination of the chapter was designing multimedia presentations. These are generally supplementary to an oral presentation. They can contain videos and illustrations, and main points of the presentation. Whatever the case, they should not be so complex that they distract from the point trying to be made. Sticking with just a few points per slide, and minimal text within them, is a good way to go. The seventh and last focus of the chapter is on poster presentations. Similar to a multimedia presentation, a poster presentation can have illustrations and limited text. It should be created so that it can be observed from about four feet away and, also similar to the multimedia and oral presentations, talking with the audience will likely be a key facet of its presentation.

Chapter Eighteen



            Chapter eighteen focused on understanding design principles. Design principles include balance, emphasis, placement, repetition, and consistency. These different principles can be implemented to best allow a writer to accomplish their goals; however they must be restricted and not allowed to be exceedingly complex. Keeping a level of simplicity allows better understanding of the document. Readers’ understanding is the main goal of good design. A well-organized design that allows the reader to move smoothly, understanding the location of different ideas and information. It also helps the reader better understand the goals of the document. What genre the document is also helps dictate the design. Readers expect adherence to basic styles already set in a genre, and by using those designs, the reader will better understand the content. In choosing design elements, the main ones consist of fonts, line spacing, and alignment. The layout of the document dictates the positions of the different elements, like page numbers, columns, and headers. Using colors, shading, borders and rules can allow a document to look better and also make them have easier to understand organization. In addition, illustrations, such as graphs, tables, and photographs, can allow a more appealing and better understood document. But when using illustrations, they should be positioned near the text they are referencing. 

Thursday, February 12, 2015

Chapter Twelve



            The subject of chapter twelve was developing an argument. The first step in the development of arguments is to choose reasons in support of the thesis statement. For an argumentative document, the writer tries to convince the reader to except the argument with reasons. The reasons should be constructed with thought towards how much the reader already knows. The reasons need to be chosen with the arguments and counterarguments in mind. The second step in the development of arguments is to find evidence that backs up the reasons. For an academic essay, this would mainly include sources from libraries and databases. The third step is choosing how to appeal to the readers. There are various appeals, such as ones to emotion, character and authority. Logical appeals can work from facts and principles to come up with a conclusion. In evaluating the integrity of an argument, checking for logical fallacies is a good idea. Fallacies that distract the reader from the argument are based on the focus of something on the side. This could include attacking a person and not their argument, or bringing up something completely irrelevant. Fallacies based on questionable assumptions include oversimplifying arguments in order to more easily refute them, or hastily generalizing. Fallacies based on misrepresentation can often include incomplete information, such as only representing evidence for one side of an argument or using bad analogies. Examples of fallacies that have careless reasoning are circular reasoning, which uses a statement to support itself, or fallacies that state if a couple things happened around the same time, they must be related.